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NLCP English Department

Welcome to the Write to New Heights Student Writing Resource Portal.

Click on the underlined "Resources" links for more resources.

 

Skill

An A essay has:

( 9.0-10.0 points)

A B essay has:

(8.0-8.9 points) 

A C essay has:

(7.0-7.9 points)

An F essay has:

(0-6.9 points)

Your

Points

Ideas/

Evidence

Thesis/Claim

A statement of your argument; the essay’s “main idea”

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An exceptional thesis/claim that responds to the assignment

 

An effective thesis/claim that responds to the assignment

A somewhat effective thesis/claim that somewhat responds to the assignment

No thesis/claim, one that does not make sense, or one that does not respond to the assignment

 

Supporting Ideas/ Evidence

Ideas and evidence that support your thesis/claim

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Exceptional supporting ideas/evidence that make logical sense

Effective supporting ideas/evidence that make logical sense

Supporting ideas/

evidence, which somewhat make sense

Either very few or no supporting ideas/evidence or ideas/evidence which do not make sense

 

Analysis of Supporting Ideas/Evidence

Logical connection of ideas/

evidence to your thesis/claim, including appropriate set-ups

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Exceptional explanations that connect the ideas/evidence to the thesis/claim

 

Effective  explanations that connect the ideas/evidence to the thesis/claim

 

Somewhat effective explanations that connect the ideas/evidence to the thesis/claim

Ineffective or no connection of  ideas/evidence to the thesis/claim

 

 

Organization

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Introduction

A preview of the essay body that includes a thesis/claim and gives its context

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An exceptional introduction that includes a thesis/claim, its context and a preview of the essay body

An effective introduction that includes a thesis/claim, its context and a preview of the essay body

A somewhat effective introduction that includes a thesis/claim, its context and a preview of the essay body

No introduction, or an introduction without a thesis/claim, context or preview of the essay body

 

Body Paragraphs and Transitions

Organization at the paragraph level; each paragraph has a clear topic sentence stating its main idea and supporting sentences.  Connections from one paragraph to another and within paragraphs

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Paragraphs with exceptional topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences

 

Exceptional transitions between and within paragraphs

 Paragraphs with effective topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences

 

 

Effective transitions between and within paragraphs

Paragraphs with somewhat effective topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences

 

Somewhat effective transitions between and within paragraphs

Paragraphs with ineffective or no topic sentences, supporting sentences or concluding sentences

 

Ineffective or no transitions between or within paragraphs

 

Conclusion

A fresh restatement of thesis/claim and a thoughtful ending to the essay

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An exceptional conclusion

An effective conclusion

A somewhat effective or off-topic conclusion

Ineffective or no conclusion

 

 

Language

Style

Vocabulary, sentence structure and variety used to establish a unique writer’s voice

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Exceptionally advanced and complex vocabulary, frequently varied sentence structure and length

Effectively advanced and complex vocabulary, occasionally varied sentence structure and length

A mostly accurate vocabulary, some varied sentence structure and length

Inaccurate vocabulary; rarely varied sentence structure and length

 

Tone

An appropriate use of language that shows an awareness of audience, purpose and occasion

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A tone that shows an exceptional awareness of audience, purpose and occasion

A tone that shows an effective awareness of audience, purpose and occasion

A tone that shows a somewhat effective awareness of audience, purpose and occasion

A tone that shows ineffective or no awareness of audience, purpose and occasion

 

Mechanics

Grammar & Usage

No unintended run-ons or fragments, correct subject-verb & pronoun-antecedent agreement, correct tense, correct punctuation, capitalization and spelling

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Exceptional control of grammar and writing conventions with no errors

Effective control of grammar and writing conventions, with few errors that do not prevent understanding

Somewhat effective control of grammar and writing conventions, with occasional errors that limit understanding

A lack of control of grammar and writing conventions, with frequent errors that prevent understanding

 

Formatting

12-point font, correct margins and spacing and other assignment-specific directions

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Correct formatting

Mostly correct formatting

 

Somewhat correct formatting

 

Incorrect formatting

 


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